When You Are Old by Williams Butler Yeats
When you are old and grey and full of sleep,
And nodding by the fire, take down this book,
And slowly read, and dream of the soft look
Your eyes had once, and of their shadows deep;
How many loved your moments of glad grace,
And loved your beauty with love false or true,
But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you,
And loved the sorrows of your changing face;
And bending down beside the glowing bars,
Murmur, a little sadly, how Love fled
And paced upon the mountains overhead
And hid his face amid a crowd of stars.
When You Are Old by William Butler Yeats is a warning for a person about love. Yeats diction lulls the reader into a comfortable state in the beginning, while including hidden biting illusions throughout. Imagery used also draws comparisons to heaven and hell.
The poem is thought to be based on French poet Pierre de Ronsard’s “Quand Vous Serez Bien Vieille” (When You Are Old) in Sonnets pour Hélène. The mystery person throughout the poem is most likely Maud Gonne–Yeat’s muse for many years. Interestingly, Gonne rejected his many marriage proposals and married another man in 1903.
The first stanza creates a warm, comforting feel through word choices like “sleep,” “nodding,” “slowly,” and “dream.” The poem follows an Enclosed rhyme scheme (abba) throughout the twelve lines. The first line describes the woman’s (let’s say the person is female) “old” and “grey” features, but also mentions that she is “full of sleep.” Which, literally, of course means sleepy, but figuratively might mean full of life or years of sleep; meaning near death. “Nodding by the fire” also describes a sleepy state, but connotes dying and even (this might be a stretch) going to hell after death (seen in the “fire”). The Land of Nod in the Book of Genesis is where Cain fled to after murdering Abel, and may also have been where Adam and Eve were banished. The final line of the first stanza describes the woman dreaming of her past beauty, and particularly her eyes. Oddly, Yeats chooses the phrase “shadows deep” to describe her eyes. Which, unless cultural norms have changed so much since the late 1800s, isn’t normally an appealing description of someone. I interpreted it as shadows of vice hidden within her. Eyes are historically referenced to be a direct pathway to one’s soul. And if these shadows, which often hold a negative connotation, from her eyes go deep, it isn’t hard to imagine that Yeats may have been subtly passing judgment on this woman.
The second stanza begins by mentioning the attention the woman got for her “beauty” and “glad grace.” While the phrase “glad grace” is one of the only examples of alliteration throughout the poem, I couldn’t find anything specific that Yeats may have wanted to express through that choice. He also points out that the people loved this woman with love “false or true”; most likely false because of the superficial reasons (“glad grace and beauty”) they loved her for. Yeats finally says that one man (most likely him) loved this woman for her true self, and still loved her as she aged–in contrast with the false love based on beauty. Yeats says he loves the “pilgrim soul” in the woman or, in layman’s terms, the adventurous soul.
Now the poem begins to describe the woman’s actions upon reminiscing about the past. She bends down “beside the glowing bars” of the fireplace she is sitting next to, which may be compared to the bars or gates of heaven. Perhaps she is looking in on her lover (Yeats) in heaven. As she is against the bars, she murmurs how “Love” escaped her. This could be a personification of Love, a reference to the Greek god of love. It could also be referring to a specific love: the one that existed between Yeats and Gonne. The final two lines, while using beautiful imagery, is still a mystery to me. The “Love” that fled the woman is pacing upon mountains and is hiding among the stars. All this grand language involving larger than life things like mountains, stars, and skies makes it feel a bit supernatural. Yeats may be saying that the love they once had for each other is gone or that because he is dead (at that future time) the love is in heaven with him (amid the stars).
Despite multiple interpretations, the poem makes it clear through a combination of appreciative diction and harsh illusions that this person (Yeats) truly loves this other person (Gonne), but predicts a bad ending if immorality leads her to ignore the true love in front of her.
